This week for our summer learning journey. We had to make a poem about the first man to step on the moon. we made these poems because we had to make a feeling out of these poems, And what it would feel like.
Hi Sione, this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
Hi Sione! Great job on completing this activity! What was the hardest thing about this activity? Remember to re read your text just to make sure everything is correct! Blog you later! ~ Florence
Hi Sione, this is Mrs Collins from Manaiakalani and I'll be commenting on blogs over term break. Well done on posting and participating in the SLJ this year. I really like the poem you created about walking on the moon - would you REALLY like to walk on the moon? I'm not too sure I'd like the journey there... Keep blogging, and commenting on others, to increase your chance of winning one of the awesome prizes and to keep up your learning over the school break!
ReplyDeleteHi Sione!
ReplyDeleteGreat job on completing this activity! What was the hardest thing about this activity? Remember to re read your text just to make sure everything is correct!
Blog you later!
~ Florence