This week for the summer learning journey we had to write in a story about any time people saved someone. My story was about my mum my mum saved my grandpa because he was in a gang fight. Doing this activity was good because it will bring back good memories in the past.
Kia ora Sione
ReplyDeleteWell done for making your way through so much of this years' SLJ programme, "Changemakers: People who have changed the world" - thanks for telling us about someone doing something particularly brave - or in this case when both your Mum and your Grandpa both did something brave.
It sounds like your Mum cares quite a lot for your Grandpa - are they very close?
I like the font that you've used for this story because it looks like it should be in a comic book. It would be cool to see you incorporate some illustration in to this post, too!
Looking forward to reading more of your mahi soon.
Cheers,
Jordan
Hi Sione!
ReplyDeleteGreat job on completing this activity! What was the hardest thing about this activity? Remember to re read your text just to make sure everything is correct!
Blog you later!
~ Florence